Facebook Wordcraft

Willie Shakes
How best to express my sincerity?

First Draft

Spending time on Facebook has the potential to connect us; to bring us together on the essential issues that define us as humans. We just need to remain respectful and sympathetic. Sometimes we don’t understand that people may be struggling with issues that are not easy for us to see.

Second Draft

I see you’ve been rummaging through the clearance bin at Memes For Morons again. Why do you insist on posting this garbage to Spending time on Facebook? has the potential to connect us; to bring us together on the essential issues that define us as humans. We just need to remain respectful and sympathetic. Sometimes we I don’t understand that people may be struggling with issues that are not easy for us to see. why you can’t take a moment to write out what you think in your own words. Thinking for yourself also allows space for the possibility of not posting anything at all.

Final Draft

I see you’ve been rummaging through the clearance bin at Memes For Morons again. Why do you insist on posting this garbage to Facebook. I don’t understand why you can’t take a moment to write out what you think in your own words. Thinking for yourself allows space for the option of not saying anything at all. is a toxic stack of suck and so are you.